How to turn my life around?

Ok. Other than, say, those that starve in ethiopia..
And “friends” that have been imprisoned out of stupidity..
I’d say my life has been pretty screwed up.
I went straight for the family business during school, achieved my GED later because everybody “praised” the Good-Enough-Diploma.
All the GED is now, is a laughing-stock, far more than against pure dropouts. [...]

I need to turn this paragraph that i wrote into a Dramatic Monologue. Help!?

Please review then help me turn it into a monologue
The invitation arrived not long before mid-day. It was with surprise that, as I opened the envelope, I found an elaborately decorated card, calling on me to attend a party of sorts, at a stranger’s [...]